1. Emphasis on the intercourse of the plants stem into models labia and vaginal opening. 2. Use the sound of the head popping/sliding in as sound effect later on, amplified to describe the sound of the birth during the fade to black close up. 3. Could you maybe get this wet?. Its just it could be one of those erotic horror things, where something affects the heroines body. What im thinking is the plant exerts pheromones that make you get wet before even taking the shaft inside you. 4.Could you be a bit hairy? It sort of adds another layer to spread open down there, and the hairs can get sticky with dewy goodness. If not. thats fine. 5. I guess this would be categorized as ASMR/dirty talk? The female lab tech cuts her finger and infects herself with an Ali3n spore. As the male techs are talking about what the spore is possibly capable of, she is already feeling the effect of the spore inside of her. Because shes a girl, the spore somehow causes her to become pregnant. The hallway scene is what is so hot to me. The way she expresses her gynecological discomfort, with ah s and oooh! and panting as the germ inside her makes her get pregnant. The only thing better would be for you to place emphasis on your lower belly and pussy. This would be a good follow-up to pushing out the cream pie. A sort of too late! moment. First, its what inspired this plant sex fantasy of mine. Second is the shots of her PANTING. WOW I want that. The first time I saw it, I wasnt sure what was going on. Was she possessed, lost in the throes of a continuous orgasm? Or was she somehow giving birth to her clone, as it seems to imply the plant crawled up to her pussy? Either way, it makes for both erotic sex and labour noises IMHO. The rest of the appeal of the scene for me is pure dirty speculation on my part. Feel free to leave this out if its a no go, okay? For all intents and purposes, she is fucked by a PLANT. Yet she calls it a fungus. In fact, she emphasizes FUNGUS right after placing her hand over her pussy. This seemed to me to signify the dirty nature of the sex that was about to happen, like she was about to catch a yeast infection from the Ali3n plant. I would like this, because it speaks to a gynecology fetish. Sort of akin to sweaty gym pussy . It calls attention to a private place issue. Sounds a bit gross, but then, a woman could get a yeast infection simply by pushing a candy cane up into her vagina. So I imagine it like this. Woman rides on a phallic fungus until both she and it discharge . Due to being pumped so full of the foreign spore, she speaks about the discomforts of her monthly cycle, namely cramps. She tries to push out the stuff but worries about the stuff still inside. Fearing getting a yeast infection causes her to muse about the need to douche once she gets back. The end result is instead of a dirty pussy, she gets a pregnant one. Sounds a bit complicated, so feel free to disregard it, but I find it to fit what I would call dirty talk in this situation. Also maybe a pet name for her vagina, namely tootie , to underscore this private area she is sharing with the Ali3n, and the viewer. If not, vagina and pussy are just fine. Finally, you have a very lovely bum, so I would like to see you kind of twerk it on the dildo as you ride. That sort of hip movement that spreads the buttocks and gives winks of the vagina gripping the dildo. The scene is sort of gross, but what an ingenious shot! You could use that for anything from simulating pushing out the Ali3n plants cream pie, to douching in a shower setting, or even a birth of a large vegetable or fruit. Just an idea. Id much rather see you wet and spreading, up close toward the end Final Final is labor sounds. get out among other sounds, namely the first noise she makes while staring at the moon, only more sexy groany and a little less shrieky . Other than that, more of your sexy dialogue that you used for the birth in my last commission, please ,